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in this time i would like to share my statement purpose when i was applied for Khazar University International Scholarship in the year 2017. finally i got this acceptance letter from Khazar University

i hope my statement of purpose will be useful for your dream to get the international Scholarship, then lets check out.....

STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

My name is Bangkit Febrianto. I have a big interest and passion in chemical knowledges. I realized how important the role of chemical knowledge in our life. This Chemical knowledge can be use to create many technology for human life, especially chemical technology, such as soap making, metals refining, and the others technology. This is form of dependence on the current chemical technology. If today people have a lot of that depends on the technology, how it will be in the future.
 

I am applying for undergraduate program in chemical engineering at khazar university. Chemical engineering is the branch of engineering that deals with chemical processes. This major includes designing equipment, system and processes for refining raw materials to make valuable product. I had followed a lot of improvement activities in chemical engineering. I also often won several competition related with chemical engineering such as chemistry olympiad. My academic achievement while in high school is very excellent. I have graduated from MAN Babakan Ciwaringin with report average grade 89,64/100 and always get the first rank each semester. The value of my chemistry never less than 85, even in the last semester i have got the value of 95. The value of my math never less than 82 and my physics never less than 81.
 

Azerbaijan is a special country that can excite my expectations. Azerbaijan is the border between the continents of asia and europe that make Azerbaijan rich in many things. If i can continue my studies at Khazar University, not only meet people from different countries but also exchange ideas with them. In other hand, Khazar University is one of the best place for international student to learn. And educations system in Azerbaijan are differents from my country. It will be new experience for me. So that my insight, skill, and knowledge will increase rapidly. That condition will help me in the future. In fact in the future, people are going to be successful is not just have science but also has extensive insight and skill. So i am ready to meet the future and i believe that Khazar University will be a part of my successful ways. 

After having studied chemical engineering at Khazar University, then my future plan is to build a chemical industry to processing oil and natural gas in my country. Indonesia is a country with abundant natural resources, but all this potential is not maximized yet. I will design industries in my country that process raw materials into the high value product with the principal of conservation without have to harming the environment. I also plan to develop another chemical industries, such as petrochemical, coal, cement, and others. So that i can create job opening for people, It can decrease unemployment rate in my country. I hope people in my country can feel the result for their life. Because my real happiness when i can see people in my country feeling prosperous. I will do my best for my country, indonesia